hazel eyes

"If you have to sit there and rewrite it again and again, don't do it." Since when is it bad to rewrite? I don't agree with most of them, but ...

I must admit I am surprised and extremely delighted to have so much positive feedback from almost everyone. Thanks for the reviews. I agree that there could be more to ...

I liked this. For the most part it seemed to flow really well, but at places the rhyme seemed a little off.

I like what you're trying to say, but some of it confused me. I had a bleeding heart While I was waking up I decided to start Hoping for the ...

This is very sweet and touching. It made me smile. However, The rhyme is mostly simple and somewhat forced. The lines are a bit long, and, in some places, it ...

It was good, but it could be better if you clean it up a bit. I did enjoy it, but i was also confused by it. Maybe it's just me, ...

I really liked this. Overall it was great. It gently trembles with a quake, Leaving soft ripples in its wake, These lines are the only thing I had a problem ...

I really enjoyed this. I can't see anything that needs changed. It's really good.

Troubled Reflection Broken little girl, Storm-cloud covered eyes, Brave, yet not enough, Nobody’s seen her cry. Reflecting in the glass, A face, not a bit confused, Showing a clear knowing ...

I love this. I really understand what you're saying here. You're talking about how ignorant people are to the fact that so many had to die for freedom, right? It's ...

I've been writing poetry for awhile, but I'm not good at all. Lately, I've been getting frustrated with it. I recently decided that I'd like to make an attempt at ...

I'm Christian. I'm not sure what denomination I'd really call myself. I go to a Baptist church, but mainly because I am forced to by my parents. I don't actually ...

My name is Sarah. I'm not exactly sure how this all works yet. I haven't been writing very long. So don't expect much.

This is really good. I wish I could write like this. I did catch some things though. This has already gone too far. Creiha told herself and picked her skirts ...